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Topic: Dragonball Bardock After - Chapter 01 - Chapter 03  (Read 293 times)

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« on: August 16, 2017, 04:41:27 PM »

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Story 7/10
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It was a fairly fun read, although the translation was really wonky (I've seen worse).

Young Jijii's a pretty talented artist, but good grief, he traces Toriyama's panels even more than Toyotaro (although unlike Toyotaro, Jijii's art doesn't look dull and flat, and he seems to consistently draw on-model).
Oh well... at least he can write fairly well by comparison.


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 Steel is my body and fire is my blood
 I have created over a thousand blades
 Unknown to Death, Nor known to Life
 Have withstood pain to create many weapons
 Yet, those hands will never hold anything
 So as I pray, Unlimited Blade Works."

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« Reply #2 on: August 17, 2017, 08:05:18 PM »
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So i gave it a try and i have to say that it's actually really nice.

Wanna read more  >:D
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« Reply #3 on: August 18, 2017, 02:12:04 AM »

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Even though I'm not a big fan of manga, I might give this a shot. Dragon Ball manga is always fun to read. Well, almost always (based on what I've heard of the DBS manga, I wanna stay away from it).

However, I'm kinda busy right now so it'll have to wait.
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Overall it's rather enjoyable.  Some of the traced images are really obvious, but copying Toriyama's style isn't exactly what I would call easy I've been trying on and off for years and still can't do it

I feel it's worth mentioning that I like that not only did this spinoff create an entire new character, but a rather interesting one.  Tapole is a well crafted and well executed character, and is an interesting take on a more peaceful yet still fierce Saiyan.  It gets my seal of approval for sure.
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« Reply #5 on: August 23, 2017, 04:08:52 AM »

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All of the traced images are really obvious, but copying Toriyama's style isn't exactly what I would call easy I've been trying on and off for years and still can't do it.

Fixed that for you. :P


"I am the bone of my sword
 Steel is my body and fire is my blood
 I have created over a thousand blades
 Unknown to Death, Nor known to Life
 Have withstood pain to create many weapons
 Yet, those hands will never hold anything
 So as I pray, Unlimited Blade Works."