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Not bad, bro! It has really nice balance overall, it flows really nicely. I think the bottom one is definitely better, the white outline feels out of place, while the black lines makes a nice border and helps the characters pop out more. Nicely done!
I like it, but I get a weird feeling of emptiness because I think there should be something in the center, but that's only my opinion.
I get that feeling too but adding something there will make the thing have a lot of elements and it would be too... overloaded? Not sure if that's the term used in english. I studied graphic design in spanish but that's the literal translation of the word.
That's kinda what I felt too. I thought maybe you should add something near the bottom, but then I felt like it would be too crowded. The space in the middle really works for this I think.
Ok let me see.You using design of signature where renders are outside of border ok, but follow this.1. Full renders outside of border can not be cut out like you did, they need to be full.2. If you want to cut out then let it be half outside, that is legs gone and render placed on down border.This way you will get feeling that render comes out from signature.3. Kid gohan on right, is good enough and other things too just that DBOR Render Logo, fix it soo that others renders "don't eat him".Just check out what I say here and it will be much better, good luck.
I actually really like the 3rd one, but I think it might look a bit better if you put the text at the bottom and young gohan at the top. In other words, switch the positions of middle gohan and the dbo revelations emblem. Just a thought! These are all really good though!
Thought so too but kid gohan would be sitting in the air because of the picture I got it from. I could place DBOR Logo in the middle and half of Gohan showing up on top of it. Just came up with that, I'll try it later.
Getting better. I like the third one.
I think it still needs alot of work tbh.Its decent as is, but it just has a very "amateur-ish" look to it somehow.
By "the third one" you mean my current sig?